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Interracial Relationships Seen Through Eyes of Racist Young Adult Author

4:37 pm - 07/30/2012
This is an essay written by the author of this quality publication (warning, autoload video which will blow you away with its offensiveness) that appeared in the Huffington Post.

I was wondering if there would be a backlash to the twist on racial issues I present in my new Young Adult novel, Save The Pearls, Part One, Revealing Eden.

This lack of objection does not come in a vacuum, either. Literally, dozens of bloggers, mostly in the YA and romance book community, have reviewed the book, along with such mainstream sources as The San Francisco Book Review, Fresh Fiction, The Midwest Book Review, and others.

Before you assume that this post is merely a means to flaunt those rave reviews, pay attention to what exactly this lack of racial commentary might mean.

First, some context: In the dystopian world of Revealing Eden, extreme solar radiation has wiped out most of the white race whose lack of melanin causes them to succumb to the Heat. The survivors, called Pearls, suffer from oppression under the new majority of dark-skinned Coals.

When Eden unwittingly compromises her father's secret biological experiment, perhaps mankind's only hope, she is cast out -- into the last patch of rainforest and the arms of a powerful beast-man she believes is her enemy, despite her overwhelming attraction to him. To survive, Eden must change -- but only if she can redefine her ideas of beauty -- and of love.

Her love interest, Bramford, is a Coal. So yeah, this is about an interracial relationship in a post-apocalyptic world. Or more narrowly, if you take out the question of race, a Beauty and the Beast story in which both parties must find self-acceptance (no story spoilers) before they can discover true love.

Not too many years ago, I can imagine that this story might have generated heated comments about the sexualized fantasies about black men. And yeah, there was one. And having checked out that blogger, I strongly suspect that he belongs to a much older generation than young adults.

Otherwise, I'm happily surprised to say there has been not a blip of protest.


So what does the lack of any racial outrage or puzzlement or fervor amidst the tremendous rain of positive reviews possibly say?

Conceivably, if the book had not reached the African-American community of readers, if such a category still exists, perhaps there might be some backlash. The first young African American reader who responded to me loved the book. But then, she's the kind of free spirit who would eschew limiting herself to a single category.

Or perhaps -- and this is what I hope -- the YA generation sees race in a way that is unique to them, unique in our history. After all, they have arrived on the scene decades past the integration of schools and Jim Crow, even well past the days of The Cosby Show.


Soap-mouth-washing words that were forbidden in my youth now populate rap songs so often I wonder if, happily, they have lost their vile connotations.

I have endeavored to raise my children with a color-free mentality. My son once mentioned that his color was white while mine was tan. This was said with no more feeling than if he'd been describing the different colors of our bedrooms.

No doubt most kids today would laugh at or find puzzling an incident that I now see influenced the way I thought about race in a blink of an instant.

Imagine this: a fourth grade girl with wild curly hair, huge green eyes and large bee-stung lips, her skin perpetually tanned from the Florida sun, stands alone waiting for her mother to pick her up after school. A large yellow school bus begins to pull away when a young boy sticks his head out of the window and hurls a racial slur at the girl.

Her first reaction is shame. He has slandered her with an ugly epithet -- a disgusting remark about her lips. Later, she wonders how he could possibly have mistaken her race. She is white, the remark usually targeted at blacks. (The term "African American" did not exist in that day.)

Confused and hurt, she wonders why her appearance should elicit such hatred. She hides this incident in the back of her mind and never repeats it to anyone until many years later when she writes a book in which she turns racial stereotypes upside down.

Only when I began to answer interview question and answers, did I recall the incident, and wonder how it had informed the story. Writers pluck bits and pieces from their lives and weave them, often unconsciously, only hoping the seams between reality and fiction do not show.


I am not naïve enough to think we live in a world without racial issues. In fact, I hope that my book will give those who have never experienced prejudice the opportunity to think about it in a new way, especially in terms of how our decaying environment one day may turn around the status quo.

The majority feeling that bloggers have expressed about Bramford: he's sexy, not because of his color, but because he's a strong hero. A comment on his beastly transformation at Bookies is the norm: "...became this sexy, strong, mysterious character who I fell in love with." Or as The Cozy Reading Corner writes: "Bramford is beastly... in a good way."

Or as Jean Vallesteros at Jean Book Nerd comments: "The relationship with Eden and Ronson is quite appealing. Although they are so opposite from one another, they discover something special in each other."

Primarily, the young adult community's comments on Revealing Eden have tended to embrace the way in which the protagonist learns to value her inner beauty. As Melissa Silva wrote for The Bookshelf: "A great story showing that you can't judge a book by its cover, and that beauty comes from within."

Which is the real message of the book, and why I love writing for open-minded young adults! Let's hope they carry a better view of the world into the future.


There are a lot of links at the source that I didn't transfer over here. You might want to check those out. The comments are closed, and the two that are up are positive. Hmmmmm.
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arisma 30th-Jul-2012 09:52 pm (UTC)
I'm stuck waaaaay back on "Pearls" and "Coals".
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arisma 30th-Jul-2012 09:58 pm (UTC)
Imagine this:...
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lickety_split 30th-Jul-2012 09:53 pm (UTC)
I stopped at the plot description.
lickety_split 30th-Jul-2012 09:58 pm (UTC)
Also LMAO @ the only thing dystopian in her book is the fact that there are fewer white people.
kitanabychoice 30th-Jul-2012 09:55 pm (UTC)
I saw this posted the other day at ontd_feminism. My brain instantly shattered into a thousand pieces when realizing that so many people will be "into" this book and not even gaf about how truly racist this really is. In fact, I bet you'll get called racist for even insinuating that this book is racist.
amyura 31st-Jul-2012 01:33 am (UTC)
I got a fuckton of shit, all from fellow white people, when I posted on Facebook about some of the racefail in "The Help." Mostly how they learned so much from reading the book. Pretty sure the same thing will happen with this book.
astridmyrna 30th-Jul-2012 09:57 pm (UTC)
The survivors, called Pearls, suffer from oppression under the new majority of dark-skinned Coals.

I just can't get past this. I just just just just--WTF KIND OF EDITOR/PUBLISHER/READER would think this was OK at any level? At all?

"Bramford is beastly... in a good way."

Omg. How sheltered is this person to think this is ok. Omfg.
deathchibi 30th-Jul-2012 10:10 pm (UTC)
I think she did vanity publishing/self publishing.
girly123 30th-Jul-2012 09:59 pm (UTC)
Oh god, I was waiting for this bullshit to show up here. The post about it on the mothership had me both laughing and wanting to punch a hole through my laptop.

Edited at 2012-07-30 10:00 pm (UTC)
skellington1 31st-Jul-2012 12:24 am (UTC)
Yeah, I saw it on Tumblr and I think I assumed I saw it here instead because it was inevitable. I'm torn between disbelieve, anger, and wanting to ignore the whole vanity published mess.
its_anya 30th-Jul-2012 10:00 pm (UTC)
jocelyncs 30th-Jul-2012 11:07 pm (UTC)
Wow. *stares googly-eyed* Hypnotic. And so appropriate.
walkwithheroes 30th-Jul-2012 10:01 pm (UTC)
The novel in question is extremely racist. Not only are the whites "pearls", some also wear black-face in order to look more appealing to the "coals". The author recently wrote a blog post in which is discussed her upbringing in a rich area, where there were very few POC. That post discussed how the book is "turning the tables" on racism. If anything, the whole novel is reinforcing it, by making the POC bad and scary (and beasts!) and the white people are cowering, weak, and need to be saved.
keeni84 30th-Jul-2012 10:03 pm (UTC)
Awwww this shit is about to get real!
bethan_b_bad 30th-Jul-2012 10:04 pm (UTC)
Side-eyeing the fuck out of basically this entire concept.
87_misfit 30th-Jul-2012 10:06 pm (UTC)
Beast-man? REALLY? This book, and its author, can burn in hell.
zeonchar This is supposed to be her love interest and "coal" Bramford.31st-Jul-2012 10:15 am (UTC)
blondebeaker 30th-Jul-2012 10:10 pm (UTC)
The author is a blazing racist douchefart A rich white racist douchefart.
celtic_thistle 31st-Jul-2012 12:04 am (UTC)
Oh my god the self-congratulation of it all. Could she BE any more fucking clueless.
fenris_lorsrai I unwisely looked at the website...30th-Jul-2012 10:11 pm (UTC)
What is The Heat?

The Heat is caused by deadly, toxic levels of solar radiation. Its effects are horrific, resulting in a painful, tortuous death—imagine burning alive, from the inside out, for a week or two. The majority of Pearls are unable to step outside without contracting The Heat, whereas the Coals are protected from the sun’s radiation by the higher amounts of melanin in their skin.

Regardless, some lighter-skinned Coals still catch The Heat, so most of their population only ventures outside at night, when the effects of radiation are at its lowest. Some Pearls—especially those fairest in complexion, are never able to step outdoors.



THAT IS NOT HOW MOONLIGHT WORKS. YOU FAIL SCIENCE FOREVER.

even if you pretend that all the white people now effectively have Xeroderma pigmentosum, they can still go out at night.


also apparently all the women have to mate by age 18 or get killed. and the entire population is addicted to oxy.

Edited at 2012-07-30 10:13 pm (UTC)
futureframe Re: I unwisely looked at the website...30th-Jul-2012 10:58 pm (UTC)
yeah, seriously. ignoring all the obvious horrible racism: does the author have ANY clue how radiation sickness work? any? if it's permanently so strong you're going to die within a week or two...yeah, your skin color (or clothes, or anything else for that matter) isn't going to protect you.

why not just make them vampires? that makes way more sense, tbh.

also, uhm, THE MATE RATING?! what kind of bullshit eugenics plot is that?!

no, nothing racist about that at allllll....
cyberghostface 30th-Jul-2012 10:12 pm (UTC)
Mmmm, blackface.

shadowesque13 30th-Jul-2012 10:49 pm (UTC)
yeats 30th-Jul-2012 10:14 pm (UTC)
so basically, the author decided to write a book about the worst thing to happen to her in her childhood: being mistaken for black.
iolarah 30th-Jul-2012 10:48 pm (UTC)
Pretty much!
beoweasel 30th-Jul-2012 10:14 pm (UTC)
"Pearls" and "Coals".

So, on one side, you have Pearls, which are pretty, but utterly useless and created through the irritation of a sea animal, and on the other, you have a valuable mineral which not only shaped human advancement, but our civilization is also utterly dependent on to keep it running.
executivehpfan 30th-Jul-2012 10:35 pm (UTC)
WELL THIS SOUNDS MIGHTY CONVENIENT, DOESN'T IT
cuterabbit33 30th-Jul-2012 10:17 pm (UTC)
I pretty much screamed about it on my tumblr the second I heard about it - and then ranted IRL to my mother, since I had to tell someone that this was real, lest I find out it was some horrid nightmare I was having.

I could go on and on with what's wrong with it, including...

- Comparing loss of the internet to being raped.
- The 'solution' to racial equality is turning her lover into a half panther half human hybird.
- 'Eden Newman' has to go in blackface to get married to a Coal.
- Brazilians speaking Spanish instead of their native language, Portuguese.
- Referring to Coals as 'them' and 'they'.
- Her lover is perfect because he is literally colorblind.

As someone who wants to write YA - No, scratch that, as a fucking decent human being, knowing that this book is published (I know it was self-published but still, she had to share it with SOMEONE before putting it out) makes me want to cry-rage.
lara_aine 30th-Jul-2012 10:27 pm (UTC)
Erm, does colourblindness work that way?
evewithanapple 30th-Jul-2012 10:17 pm (UTC)
I like that the protag's name is "Eden." Subtle, Foyt.

The good news is, this book is vanity published. So as disgusting as it is, it's not going to get much traction, sales-wise.
baked_goldfish 30th-Jul-2012 10:25 pm (UTC)
My fear is that the critique and condemnation of it will actually drive sales by ignorant individuals who otherwise would never have heard of this book.
girly123 30th-Jul-2012 10:19 pm (UTC)
I am not naïve enough to think we live in a world without racial issues. In fact, I hope that my book will give those who have never experienced prejudice the opportunity to think about it in a new way, especially in terms of how our decaying environment one day may turn around the status quo.

Honey...no.
The melanin that black people have in our skin, while definitely protective, would not be nearly enough to protect us against the levels of radiation that would come through our atmosphere if it were to thin we were forced underground.

Also, there are better reasons to take care of the Earth than the irrational fear that the mean ol nasty Black people will take over if you don't, I mean come the fuck on.
lickety_split 31st-Jul-2012 12:08 am (UTC)
I love that she appears to believe that black people are literally black, and that our skin acts as a shield to the sun's rays.
awesomeosity 30th-Jul-2012 10:23 pm (UTC)
And the grand solution to the problem is turning everyone into panther hybrids.

...k.
executivehpfan 30th-Jul-2012 10:36 pm (UTC)
Rawr.
vanishingbee 30th-Jul-2012 10:23 pm (UTC)
You know what would have been a more clever thing to all POC in this? "Diamonds". Positive connotations, plus the bonus of being created by pressure (aka "heat").

She keeps talking and all I hear is "no you're racist for thinking it's racist!!!"


Edited at 2012-07-30 10:24 pm (UTC)
lara_aine 30th-Jul-2012 10:26 pm (UTC)
To be fair, a simple name change ain't gonna save this shit.

Presumably the big black hero will still be 'beastly' and the little white girl will still need protection
lara_aine 30th-Jul-2012 10:24 pm (UTC)
Will someone not think of the White People!!!!!!

There's so much offensive fuckery here I just can't. Can't. Can't I tell you!
baked_goldfish 30th-Jul-2012 10:26 pm (UTC)
zemi_chan 30th-Jul-2012 10:28 pm (UTC)
title or description


I really don't know what to say to this.
nagasasu 30th-Jul-2012 10:30 pm (UTC)
I'mma just leave this here:
girly123 31st-Jul-2012 05:49 pm (UTC)
My god. This...is how a sun-scorched world would ACTUALLY turn out.

Are there more of these?
dvdsky81 30th-Jul-2012 10:35 pm (UTC)
"I have endeavored to raise my children with a color-free mentality. My son once mentioned that his color was white while mine was tan."



*blink blink* You....that's....I....uuuuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...wot?
skellington1 31st-Jul-2012 12:34 am (UTC)
"The fact that my young children have the same issue with our societal/symbolic use of color words as everyone else's children proves we're not racist!"
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